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Monthly Archives: January 2010

What Do You Think Of This Beginning Of A Story?

please read all of this you guys, i know its alot, but i really want some input on my writing, thanks. i promise 10 points.
Prologue
“Oh my god, you guys are so immature!” Isobele nudged Craig and flipped her blonde hair. Craig nudged Isobele back and adjusted his shoulder strap.
“You guys see Mr. Nolin? His pants [...]

This Is My Second Chapter.. Kind Of. What Do You Think?

As I walk through the halls and up the staircase, I pass a couple of people in my grade. The thing about me is that I know a lot of people, but I tend not to talk to most of them. I’m kind of an awkward person. Forgive me if I’m hopeless.
By the time I [...]

Can You Read My Story On “senior Fun” And See If It’s Good?? *best Answer* (8th Grade)?

Just read it and tell me what you’d give me if you were to grade me. And if you find any mistakes, PLEASE point them out. (Not only grammatically but in “Voice” too. If it’s JUICY to read) For A BIGGER CHANCE of best answer, please ADD THE juicy-ness to it so make it [...]

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